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[aphrodite_mine]

Pick a paragraph (or any passage between... let's say 200 and 600 words) from anything I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

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She dreams of a giant who has no hair on the top of his head. His arms grow and grow and grow. He doesn’t smile but she likes him. She listens to what he has to say. He tells her that this is only the beginning and she says I know.

*

Laura comes but it is Wednesday so she doesn’t know if it is a good day. The man is here, looking. Johnny is dead. Maybe it is a good day, if Laura holds her hand and helps her make words on paper. She tells Laura about the small machine and Laura smiles.

She won’t tell Laura about the giant or that Agent Cooper has a first name and it is Dale. These are secrets, and Audrey likes secrets. Almost as much as Tuesdays.

*

She taps his shoulder and holds out her hand.

He frowns for a moment, and then flips open the machine and places it there. She reads slowly The owls are not what they seem.

from here (http://community.livejournal.com/obscureddark/96651.html).